Tonight, I am sad :
heart sinking,
mind floating.
So I was yesterday
and the day before,
and forever.
It seems there is
as much sadness
as there is silence.
Silence makes music
perceptible ; perhaps
sadness makes life.
~~~
The Past Is Gone
Tonight, I am sad :
heart sinking,
mind floating.
So I was yesterday
and the day before,
and forever.
It seems there is
as much sadness
as there is silence.
Silence makes music
perceptible ; perhaps
sadness makes life.
~~~
the doodling poet 
Very lovely, simple and effective.
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Good one…. Silence and sadness go hand in hand
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Sadness is empowering!
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Too good! 🙂
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Really nice
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👌👍
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Nice one!
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Short, sweet and heart-touching
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Thank you !
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wonderfully great! Poignant enough.
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wonderfully great! Poignant enough.
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Nice little poem thank you
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Thanks Jamie !
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Silence is sad at times
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Very nice
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Comfortable vibes. I like it.
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you !
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Amazing
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😍
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It’s so good. I love it.
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Too good!
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Thanks !
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The picture go me.
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Beautiful one
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I like your thoughts…. Pls continue to write
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just a few lines;
Life thought me a million lessons,
That came with sorrow n pain;
Life thought me a million lessons,
That indeed gave me alot of gains. .
Indeed, if theres no sadness n pain..
there wont b fun in enjoying d gains…
Good one……
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Great read! Truly enjoyed it, I’m a huge fan of gloom haha.
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Sadness heals and kills at the same time …….
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true, but only in retrospect do we see the healing !
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its hard , sometime it leaves you Numb and fainting
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indeed it is. I cannot wait to be on the other side 🙂
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Amazing
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I agree, beautiful.
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Wow!
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Short and sweet. We all feel this way in some way or the other. Some days more than others. Appreciate this read.
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Thank you ! It feels good to know that the feeling is shared !
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wow, that’s really good.
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Thanks !
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Great. Now I want a cocktail.
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what ? that’s some dumb shit ! jk
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Roar
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The poem is good but it seems incomplete.
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I thought the doodle completed it – but perhaps you could add something that it is missing !
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Silence could be peace sometimes, silence could be dissorder, silence hides sadness, silence is silence.
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The things dearest to us often come with a pinch of salt.In sadness, there is discovery, a dawning of life.
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The sweetest songs carry the saddest message, the irony of life.
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Short but beautiful !
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Wow I love what u wrote ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much !
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wow boy that’s i liked that :3
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Reblogged this on Rutabish.
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Wonderful short piece, especially he end.
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I always feel sadness when I look back to the past and I see that it’s gone, but I always feel excited when I look towards the future. This is a very relatable poem.
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It is indeed true – once you are far enough, the past somehow seems beautiful no matter how it was when it was the present !
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All of our emotions are gifts – thank you.
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..silence, sadness, music; a wonderful life, forever.
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Wonderful vocal imagery. Can feel the sadness in the words. If you can please check out my poems as well. Would surely love your comments and suggestions!
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