Tonight, I am sad :
heart sinking,
mind floating.
So I was yesterday
and the day before,
and forever.
It seems there is
as much sadness
as there is silence.
Silence makes music
perceptible ; perhaps
sadness makes life.
~~~
Tonight, I am sad :
heart sinking,
mind floating.
So I was yesterday
and the day before,
and forever.
It seems there is
as much sadness
as there is silence.
Silence makes music
perceptible ; perhaps
sadness makes life.
~~~
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Sadness is like percentage of water in the body which is 80 %.
Can you laugh one hour at a stretch. No you can’t.
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Oh my goodness you are funny. Well described
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It’s truly lovely
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Thank you ! 🙂
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Nice
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Sadness n silence… complementary to each other..or at times…a necessity to forge ahead towards a new Sun ! Beautiful feel -read !
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Thank you ! Sadness and silence are indeed complimentary , and though not always enjoyable, lead to better things in life !
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Amazeballs…
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❤ beautiful!
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Thank you Iflah !
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My pleasure!
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Beautiful words
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Reblogged this on Jiya's secret broods and commented:
Beautiful ❤
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Thanks Jiya !
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You’re welcome. Keep doodling as it’s great to see! 🙂
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Sharing the same mood / thoughts? Emotions. I think.
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Such a beautiful poem. xx
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Thank you so much Reyna ! Means a lot !
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Thank you Reyna ! Glad you liked it !
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The title is thoughtful, experimenting new things lead to some amazing stuff, and no doubt the short excerpt of your poetry is good. I liked the concept.
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Great
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Check me out pls! I’m a starter
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Without sadness what is happiness. It’s all a balancing act.
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True indeed ! There are no absolutes !
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There are absolutes. Sadness is a fact of life, but when handled wrongly it can continue in a cycle of sadness anger bitterness. So its good to always look out the window and see the sunshine
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I agree ! It is even better perhaps to go out in the sun and play ! 😀
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U might like this;
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Absolutely love this!!
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Yayy ! I am glad you do !
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There is button on the bottom left side of page that says “Join the league” !
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So thoughtful
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Love this
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Thanks !
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Sadness is a part of life but not in entirety. But it’s essential but it is not supposed to exist everyday.
I hope you find something that negates the sadness. Great poem! Made me go “whoa” at the end
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Thanks ! IF I made you go “whoa”, ,then my job was done ! 🙂
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Absolutely great. Thanks.
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Thank you !
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Reminds me of: Tonight I can write the saddest lines … by Neruda
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Poem from the heart… Nice one.
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Love this. So simple but says so much. The form of it really adds to the emotion, and I love your connections between silence/music and sadness/life.
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Thanks ! I am glad you liked it !
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Good work ey!
….so here we stand stuck in time
our hearts paying a huge fine
For all the times we went out line
And didnt take one look at the sign
The sign of our loved ones hurting
Hurting because to make it work we had stopped trying….
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Awesome blog!
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Thanks !!
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Truly enjoyed !
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I am glad you did !
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Just lovely 🙂
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Thank you !
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Love this!!
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Hmmm
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Wonderful💜💜
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Silence isn’t so bad. Not all the time anyway:)
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True !
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Its really nice👌👌
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Sadness is life but so is happiness. Stay strong
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Pretty and poignant! I enjoyed that! (Even given the subject matter), thanks for the lovely read!
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You are welcome ! Thank you for your kind words !
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Beautifully written! Balancing of emotions explained perfectly. Loved your post!
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Thanks a lot !
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Sadness has been my subtext: silence is the way. I think, for me at any rate, that it’s all wrapped up in compassion. Nice honest writing!
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Thank you !
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Nice post .
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Nice!
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Lovely awesome piece
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Thank you !
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beautiful
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This made my heart weep. Touching..❤
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Wow ! Thank you ! That is beautiful !
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Relatable.
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I feel this so deeply. the last line, thank you
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I am glad you do ! Thank you for your kind words !
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